Lost
Stars will fall down
and the sky will burn
as roses die
all hope fades away
I'm losing ground
nothing makes sense
all that belonged to me
has vanished
in the misery
called life
no more I hope
that anything will be
no more I want
anyone around me
no more I wish
something to happen
For you're gone
where's the sense in now?
You were all I needed
your lack
is breaking me down.
Written on 21st October 2006
© Sean Dimitjana
and the sky will burn
as roses die
all hope fades away
I'm losing ground
nothing makes sense
all that belonged to me
has vanished
in the misery
called life
no more I hope
that anything will be
no more I want
anyone around me
no more I wish
something to happen
For you're gone
where's the sense in now?
You were all I needed
your lack
is breaking me down.
Written on 21st October 2006
© Sean Dimitjana
posted by Dimitjana | 10:34 AM
2 Comments:
stanza 2.....you're not "loosing" ground, you're losing ground. Also, a little punctuation goes a long way. Check out a couple I composed, on my blog: http://2cents-jojo.blogspot.com
Thank you jojo.
If there are other mistakes please tell me.
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